rush989 Posted February 6, 2008 Share Posted February 6, 2008 Hi everyone, I just went live today with a new store. Only waiting on the product pictures from the company but it is still operational as it is. Any comments or suggestions would be much appreciated. Thanks! http://www.precisionbikelube.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 6, 2008 Share Posted February 6, 2008 Hi Adam, Stores discussed in this channel must ... have the "Powered by osCommerce" text displayed on the site. Put it on and we'll be happy to give feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rush989 Posted February 6, 2008 Author Share Posted February 6, 2008 Hi Adam, Stores discussed in this channel must ... have the "Powered by osCommerce" text displayed on the site. Put it on and we'll be happy to give feedback. just got done uploading the site with the link at the bottom. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zews Posted February 6, 2008 Share Posted February 6, 2008 All you need is to get rid off those 'osCsid' in the URL, try using Ultimate Seo URL contribution. Everything else is perfect imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted February 6, 2008 Share Posted February 6, 2008 Hi again Adam, Welcome to osCommerce. Review done with Firefox2.0/broken WinXP Pro, 1024x768 16 bit resolution. Comments in no particular order. First impression of the site is very good. Good bright coloration without being overwhelming. I don't know if you used a template (good choice) or designed it yourself (excellent job). I noticed the goDaddy security logo - a consumer confidence builder. Your address and phone number are loud and proud. (I don't understand why so many legit sites hide that information.) I felt like I was dealing with an established business. I clicked on Spanish expecting this: "La industria del Lubricante de la Bicicleta de la precisión lubricantes sintéticos delanteros empujan la orilla de la tecnología de la lubricación de bicicleta. Consiga el la mayoría del fuera de su bicicleta con nuestros lubricantes de alta tecnología y grasas hizo específicamente para sus la mayoría de los requisitos extremos del cycling. Si usted es un corredor endurecido, ciclista intransigente de montaña, o un entusiasta del fin de semana, Lubricante de Bicicleta de Precisión hace un producto diseñó para conseguir las la mayoría de las velocidades y la vida fuera de su bicicleta." I clicked on French expecting this: "L'industrie du Lubrifiant de la Bicyclette de la précision des lubrifiants synthétiques avant poussent le bord de la technologie de la lubrification de bicyclette. Obtenez la la majorité de le hors de sa bicyclette avec nos lubrifiants de haute technologie et des matières grasses a fait spécifiquement pour la sa la majorité des conditions extrêmes du cycling. Si vous êtes un coureur dur, cycliste intransigente de montagne, ou un enthousiaste du week-end, Lubrifiant de Bicyclette de Précision fait un produit a conçu pour obtenir la la majorité des vitesses et la vie hors de sa bicyclette." Remove the language selection option. Changing just a few words on the site does not mean your site is in presented in that language. Your product pages present your items nicely. I noticed the same lubrication point picture under every product, even under cleaners. I want to "complain" that it is too much but I think I understand why it is an important enough picture to justify being on every product page. Nice use of "option" to handle the various size product containers. Nice set of well-worded supplemental pages; terms, privacy, ect. All in all your site looks pretty good. This part is totally optional, but I have seen similar on other sport centric sites. If you know any cycling groups/leagues/packs maybe you could devote some pages for them as in putting up their future event listings and group descriptions. This is kind of a "user friendliness" type thing. (Putting your own product banner ads on those pages gets your product in front of the eyes of biking enthusiasts [your target audience] who were not necessarily looking to buy product.) You could email your existing customer base for their groups first. This is just a thought. You site looks good and works good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rush989 Posted February 8, 2008 Author Share Posted February 8, 2008 ... Wow, thanks for all the great input. All of your comments were very insightful and I appreciate the time you took to critique my site. Thank You! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
digilee Posted February 8, 2008 Share Posted February 8, 2008 As has been mentioned before, changing a word or 2 doesn't make a site 'translated'! Also, you have character rendering problems - 'Tama�o:' Also, where's the 'shipping' details? Nice site though. SolarFrenzy Solar powered gadgets at down to earth prices. CheekyNaughty Promoting British Design Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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